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-“OK, D — Let’s take it to thirty thousand feet,”
+“OK, D — let’s take it to forty thousand.”
-Denning’s broad brogue resonated in his earpiece. “Roger, Commander.”
+Denning’s broad digital brogue resonated in Boone’s earpiece. “Roger that, Commander.”
-Instantly, Boone could feel his weight shift back as the wingsuit’s ailerons self-trimmed, its leading edge adjusted, and power surged to the flanks. The Eagle Squadron Leader soared higher, bursting through a gossamer skin of cirrus and into a vaulted dome of vivid cobalt. .
+Instantly, Boone felt his weight shift back as the wingsuit’s ailerons self-trimmed, its leading edge adjusted, and power surged to the flanks. Exiting a flush of endorphin, Eagle Squadron Commander soared, bursting through a gossamer skin of cirrus and into a vaulted dome of vivid cobalt.
+He whistled. “Excuse me while I kiss the sky.”
 “Altitude reset confirmed: forty thousand feet level, commander. Transferring control back to your fulcrum.”