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 The [[Negotiator]] cuts a swathe through the bar.
-He sees her. The girl from the agency. He catches her eye. She looks down. She flushes red. She she steals a glance through a tumbling fringe: devastatingly demure. He’s drunk on his own success He rams a [[Cayman Island rum cake|Tortuga chaser]]. That bad boy gives him wings. He sidles up.
+He sees her. ''That’s — the girl from the agency''.
-Her eyes narrow. “You ''[[Following business day convention|following]]'' me?”
+He catches her eye. There’s a flicker and its gone. She looks down. She flushes red. She she steals another look through through that tumbling fringe: devastatingly demure. He’s drunk on his own success He rams a [[Cayman Island rum cake|Tortuga chaser]]. That bad boy gives him wings. He sidles up.
-He cracks an *innocent face*. “Look, lady: I was here first.”
+She blows her fringe and contrives boredom. “You ''[[Following business day convention|following]]'' me, pal?”
+He cracks out *innocent face*. “Look, lady: I was here first.”
 She looks him up and down. “Is that a fact.” she ''says'' it like a fact, not a question.