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 ''That’s — the girl from the [[Process agent|agency]]''.
-The bar scene is chaos. His bar presence is zilch. He catches her eye. There’s a flicker and its gone. She looks down. She flushes red. She she steals another look through through that tumbling fringe: devastatingly demure. He rams a [[Cayman Island rum cake|Tortuga chaser]]. That bad boy gives him wings. He sidles up.
+The drinks counter scene is chaos & his bar presence zilch, but he catches her eye — ''just''. There’s a flicker and its gone. She looks down. She looks away. She flushes red. ''There'': she steals another look through that tumbling fringe. ''This'' is the moment.
-She blows her fringe and contrives boredom. “You ''[[Following business day convention|following]]'' me, pal?”
+He rams a [[Cayman Island rum cake|Tortuga chaser]]. That bad boy gives him wings. He sidles up.
+She blows her fringe and contrives boredom. “You ''[[Following business day convention|following]]'' me, youngster?”
 He cracks out *innocent face*. “Look, lady: I was here first.”