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 Boone motioned the unit forward with a curt, pointed air-punch.
-The squad fanned left and right. They deployed the four-hand doc-clearing technique.
+The squad fanned left and right. They deployed the four-eye doc-scanning technique.
-[[J-Rod|Janice Henderson]] went left. She swivelled in and barked, “clear”.
+[[Janice Henderson|J-Rod]] went left. She swivelled in and barked, “clear”.
 [[Algernon Farquhar|Algy]] went right. He swivelled in and barked, “clear”.
-[[Sir Jerrold Baxter-Morley, Q.C.|Baxter-Morley]] went route one. He kicked over a drum and barked, “clear”.
+[[Roly Punchface|Punchface]] went route one. He kicked over a drum and barked, “clear”.
 From nowhere: A kerfuffle behind a plaster wall to the right. The unit spun, caught offguard: panic: fumbling with safety catches, grappling with magazines.