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 ===The boobytrap===
-Boone snaps out of his reverie as the whizkid excitedly tells him there is a scramble briefing. Barber slapped his hands and rubbed them together with glee, his eyes fiercely aglow. “This is it, Boone! This is it! I’m ''finally'' going to see action!”
+Boone snaps out of his reverie as the whizzkid excitedly tells him there is a scramble briefing. Babarazza slapped his hands and rubbed them together with glee, his eyes fiercely aglow. “This is it, Boone! This is it! I’m ''finally'' going to see action!”
 The air crackled as Eagle Squad filed into the briefing room. The banter-pulse was flat.
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 History lesson at at crustards about the first men. Algy and George roleplay reg margin and Oleg paripassu
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-Boone motioned the men forward. “Okay, Babarazza, threw a redline around the immediate area.”
+Boone motioned the men forward. They fanned left and right. They depolyed the four-hand room clearing technique. E.J.P. followed up with a static-mount differentiation sensor. “Okay, Babarazza, let’s throw a redline around the immediate area.”
-The rookie unclipped his diff-binoc from his utility belt and set it up on the floor. He punched a few dials and it emitted a sheet of redlight, which swept the semantic content of the room. Babarazza watched the display. after a few moments it rendered. Zeroes across the board.
+The rookie unclipped the diff-binoc and set it up on the floor. He punched a few dials and it emitted a sheet of redlight, which swept the semantic content of the room. Babarazza watched the display. after a few moments it rendered. Zeroes across the board.
 “It comes up clean, sir. No material alterations. The textfield is Delta-1 as we left it.”
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 Boone intoned in a halting whisper. “It looks like — it looks like we have a Biggs hoson.”
-Eagle-Squad Corporal J-P Barber looked at his commander with wondrous eyes. “Seriously? A Biggs hoson! I don’t bel —”
+Eagle-Squad Corporal J-P Babarazza looked at his commander with wondrous eyes. “Seriously? A Biggs hoson! I don’t bel —”
 SHHHHHHH! silent running soldier!
-Barber clammed pronto.
+Babarazza clammed pronto.
 I don’t think it ''is'' a Biggs hoson, Barbarazza. It just looks like one. Hosons are not stable. A hoson would have degraded into entropic tedium by now. This has a much longer half-life.