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 “We’re gonna need a wall thrown up around this unit pronto.”
-“On it, Boone. You all okay?”
+“On it, Boone. Have your unit affirm confidentiality. OneNDA Protocol. You all okay?”
-“Precautionary measure only at this time, Aggie. Di-Alpha head gabbling. Most likely stale or public side but some risk of MNPI infection. Better be safe than sorry.”
+“OneNDA terms affirmed. Yeah, s fine. Precautionary measure only at this time, Aggie. Di-Alpha head gabbling. Most likely stale or public side but some risk of MNPI infection. Better be safe than sorry.”
 Aggie said, “Oopsie.”
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 A.J. cocked and aimed. “Hold it right there, tiger.”
-Kid regarded [A.J.]]’s up-close muzzle and ''gurned''. “Oh, no, I’m clean, man. I’m straight. I'm Goldboy through and through.”
+Kid regarded [A.J.]]’s up-close muzzle and ''gurned''. “Oh, no, I’m clean, man. I’m straight. I'm Wickerman, through and through.”
-The suit ''was'' sharp: Goldie grade sans doubte.
+The suit ''was'' sharp: Wickliffe grade, sans doubte.
 “I’m a ninja. ''Look''.”
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 “Freeze!”
-“Chill, man. I'm late on CBD. If I don't finish on time they will know something wing. Compliance goons monitor by the key stroke.
+“Chill, man. I'm late on [[CBT]]. If I don’t finish on time they will know something’s wrong.”
-Boone did not want a goldberg compliance detail sweeping the building right now.
+“who will?”
+“Wickliffe Compliance goons. They monitor by the keystroke.”
+Boone did not want a Wickliffe compliance detail sweeping the building right now.
 Gimme a look at that.
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 What's that?
-That's the goddamn deadline. I've been pulling all nighters on th in s goddam CDO . I gotta get this done or my ass I'd toast.
+That's the goddamn deadline. I've been pulling all nighters on this goddam CDO . I gotta get this done or my ass I'd toast.
 “Okay. It’s D.”
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 “The answer. It’s D.  “All of the above”.”
-“Sweet.” The kid clattered his keyboard. He hit return. The Wang we t blank. The hourglass twisted.30 seconds to go.
+“Oh, right. Sweet.” The kid clacked his keyboard. He hit return. The Wang went blank. The hourglass flipped. The count-down ticked. Thirty seconds to go.
+“Come on —”
+The hour-glass flipped. Twenty five seconds.
+A compliance automated reminder popped up. It threatened disciplinary.
+Punchface squealed. “Let’s wax him and get out of here, Boone.”
+“We do not have control room clearance, Roly.”
+“The place is going to blow!”
+“Wait.”
+It ticked down to 5. The Wang honked and squawked and flashed red.
+The screen came up. The machine beeped & glowed. The printer started chattering.
-The machine beeped. The test came through. 80%. Clear
+Squid kid pulled a readout off the dot matrix. The alarm died. The code red light show subsided. The lights came up.
-The kid grinned. “Nailed it. Any more was wasted effort.”
+The kid scanned the readout. He grinned. “Nailed it. Eighty percent. I’m clear. Any more was wasted effort.”
-The comlink crackled. “ Boone, this is based. Chinese wall is active. You may proceed.
+The comlink crackled. “Boone, this is control room. The wall is active. Code word: Protect Viper. You may proceed.”
 Boone opened up the comlink on back to base. “He's pretty far gone, Aggie. I think it’s stale. But he's packing a red herring. Take no chances.”