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! Crouch’s original !! The JC’s go | ! Crouch’s original !! The JC’s go | ||
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|{{indent|Barry Sutton pulls over into the fire lane at the main entrance of the Poe Building, an Art Deco tower glowing white in the illumination of its exterior sconces. He climbs out of his Crown Vic, rushes across the sidewalk, and pushes through the revolving door into the lobby. | | style="width: 50%"| {{indent|Barry Sutton pulls over into the fire lane at the main entrance of the Poe Building, an Art Deco tower glowing white in the illumination of its exterior sconces. He climbs out of his Crown Vic, rushes across the sidewalk, and pushes through the revolving door into the lobby. | ||
The night watchman is standing by the bank of elevators, holding one open as Barry hurries toward him, his shoes echoing off the marble. | The night watchman is standing by the bank of elevators, holding one open as Barry hurries toward him, his shoes echoing off the marble. | ||
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He stops. | He stops. | ||
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|| {{indent|Barry Sutton locks up his Crown Vic and squeals it to a halt on the sidewalk outside an art deco meringue. | | style="width: 50%"| {{indent|Barry Sutton locks up his Crown Vic and squeals it to a halt on the sidewalk outside an art deco meringue. | ||
The “Poe Building” glows under the glare of virgin sconces and thrusts skyward like some priapic, machine-age gorgon. | The “Poe Building” glows under the glare of virgin sconces and thrusts skyward like some priapic, machine-age gorgon. | ||