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 Boone motioned the unit forward with a curt, pointed air-punch.
-The squad fanned left and right. They deployed the four-hand doc-clearing technique. Aggie went left. She swivelled in and barked, “clear”. Algy went right.  He swivelled in and barked, “clear”.
+The squad fanned left and right. They deployed the four-hand doc-clearing technique. [[Aggie]] went left. She swivelled in and barked, “clear”. [[Algernon Farquhar|Algy]] went right.  He swivelled in and barked, “clear”.
 [[Sir Jerrold Baxter-Morley, Q.C.|Baxter-Morley]] went route one. He kicked over a drum and barked, “clear”.
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 An ear-splitting BLAM: the plaster wall was gone. A heavy wad collapsed through it, lifeless onto the floor in front of them.
-Algy cursed. “Jesus! [[Side letter]]!”
+[[Algy]] cursed. “Jesus! [[Side letter]]!”
 Boone took his finger off the [[NAV trigger]] and holstered his [[CSA]], still smoking from the muzzle. “Eyes peeled, ladies. ''Now'' we are clear.”
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 Algy looked on. “Cadet, you could be looking at a live [[Biggs particle]].”
-Eagle-Squad Cadet A.J. Paul looked at his commander with wondrous eyes. “Seriously? A Biggs hoson! I don’t bel —”
+Eagle-Squad Cadet A.J. Paul looked at his commander with wondrous eyes. “Seriously? A [[Biggs hoson]]! I don’t bel —”
 Boone turned furiously. “SHHHHHHH! Silent running, soldier!”