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-Oft rendered as “[[pursuant to the provisions of this Agreement]]”. Could more elegantly be rendered as “under”, or even “”. Fact: adding "[[pursuant to the provisions of this Agreement]]" ten times a page across a twenty page agreement, that adds 1,400 words to the document.
+Oft rendered as “[[pursuant to the provisions of this Agreement]]”. Could more elegantly be rendered as “under”, or even “ ”.
+Fact: adding “[[pursuant to the provisions of this Agreement]]” ten times a page across a twenty page agreement  adds 1,400 words to the document.
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