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 The convoy kicked up a desert plume.
-Fifteen klicks down the line, the peaceable settlement at [[Lissingdown]] was oblivious while upon it, the hounds of hell descended.
+The hounds of hell descended in Lissingdown.
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 ''Shit was about to get real''.
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-Flags flapped on the Col. The wind was getting up. ''Perfect'' conditions. The wrist-com crackled.
+Boone could see the bikes had hit the valley floor. The anemometer on his suit spun crazy: the wind was getting up. ''Perfect'' conditions.
-“Boone? Boone! Do you read me?”
+The wrist-com crackled.  “Boone? Boone! Do you read me?”
-Boone looked down: the comlink channel was still open.
+Boone looked down and cursed: he’d left the comlink channel open.
 “Boone! Respond as a priority!”
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 “BOONE!”
-“This is Staff Solicitor [[Opco Boone]], switching to silent running and signing out. All comms will now go dark. I will report again at 2100 hours.”
+“This is Eagle Squadron Leader [[Opco Boone]], switching to silent running and signing out. All comms will now go dark. I will report again at 2100 hours.”
 “GODDAMN IT B—”