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:“''[blah blah blah] ... together with the amount, [[if any]], that the Vendor incurs ... [blah blah blah ad infinitum]''” | :“''[blah blah blah] ... together with the amount, [[if any]], that the Vendor incurs ... [blah blah blah ad infinitum]''” | ||
See how it stymies the natural flow of your sentence? wouldn’t it be neater to say “''together with '''any''' amount''”? Why add that inessential adjectival clause? | See how it stymies the natural flow of your sentence? wouldn’t it be neater to say “''together with '''any''' amount the Vendor incurs''”? Why add that inessential adjectival clause? | ||
It may graunch your gears, but to a [[Mediocre lawyer|happy counsel]] it is ''pointilliste'': a percussive refrain; a syncopated rim-shot in the great jungle beat of the law. | It may graunch your gears, but to a [[Mediocre lawyer|happy counsel]] it is ''pointilliste'': a percussive refrain; a syncopated rim-shot in the great jungle beat of the law. | ||