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===Later ... ===
===Later ... ===
The fellowship managed to resist the human impulses to which we agents of the [[Tragedy of the commons|tragic commons]] resort by irrepressible force of habit: the bickering, the [[special pleading]], [[committee]] drafting, pursuit by ring-fixated goblins muttering [[Culpa in contrahendo|baffling ancient curses]]: the cannons to the right of them, cannons to the left: half a league onward rode the OneNDA [[Steering committee]], and generated a nice, simple, pleasant first edition.   
The fellowship managed to resist the human impulses to which we agents of the [[Tragedy of the commons|tragic commons]] resort by irrepressible force of habit: the bickering, the [[special pleading]], [[committee]] drafting, pursuit by ring-fixated goblins muttering [[Culpa in contrahendo|baffling ancient curses]]: despite cannons to the left and right, onward rode the OneNDA [[Steering committee]], and generated a nice, simple, pleasant first edition.   


Not [[Perfection is the enemy of good enough|''perfect'' — is anything? — but absolutely good enough]].  
Not [[Perfection is the enemy of good enough|''perfect'']] — is anything? — but absolutely [[Perfection is the enemy of good enough|good enough]].  


It’s too early to stand on the poop-deck with a mission accomplished banner, but OneNDA is getting there. We remain hopeful and optimistic. So, in a gentle further shove, here some observations about what it could all mean.  
It’s too early to stand on the poop-deck in front of a mission accomplished banner, but OneNDA is getting there. We remain hopeful and optimistic. So, here some observations about what it could all mean.  
====Simplification beats technology — and ''helps'' it.====
====Simplification beats technology — and ''helps'' it.====
''If you simplify, you may not need technology''. There is no need for automation, document assembly, even a mail merge is probably over-engineering. This is to observe that the conundrum facing modern legal eagles is not one of ''[[service delivery]]'', but ''[[Legal service|service]]'' in the first place. Fix the ''content'', and the delivery challenges fix themselves.
''If you simplify, you may not need technology''. There is no need for automation, document assembly, even a mail merge is probably over-engineering. This is to observe that the conundrum facing modern legal eagles is not one of ''[[service delivery]]'', but ''[[Legal service|service]]'' in the first place.


''If you simplify, it is easier to apply technology''. To design for technology, design for ''no'' technology. The fewer options, subroutines, [[Caveat|caveats]] and [[conditions precedent]] in your legal forms, the easier they will be to automate. You will get all kinds of second order benefits too: fewer complaints, fewer comments, less time auditing your monstrous catalogue of templates.
Fix the content, and the delivery challenges fix themselves.  


The [[JC]]’s [[maxim|handy aphorism]] applies here: {{maxim|first, cut out the pies}}.
An ironic consequence: i''f you fix the content, you need less technology, '''and''' technology works better''. To design for technology, design for ''no'' technology. The fewer options, subroutines, [[Caveat|caveats]] and [[conditions precedent]] in your legal forms, the easier they will be to automate. You will get all kinds of second order benefits too: fewer complaints, fewer comments, less time auditing your monstrous catalogue of hateful templates.
 
The [[JC]]’s [[maxim|aphorism]] applies here: {{maxim|first, cut out the pies}}.
====It’s not the [[form]], or even the content, but '''''consensus''''' that matters====
====It’s not the [[form]], or even the content, but '''''consensus''''' that matters====
Once upon a time — until 2021 —if you devised your own short-form NDA, however elegant, you could expect it to be ''rejected''<ref>There ''is'' a “battle of the forms”, even if not apparent to the [[doyen of drafting]].</ref> or [[Mark-up|marked up]] to ''oblivion'' by the [[rent-seeking]] massive.<ref>The [[JC]] knows this, because he’s tried it. No [[counterparts]] clause! No waiver of jury trials! It was still worth doing, but it didn’t completely solve the problem.</ref> Your voice was but a candle in the storm.  
Once upon a time — until 2021 —if you devised your own NDA, however brief or elegant, you could expect it to be ''rejected''<ref>There ''is'' a “battle of the forms”, even if not apparent to the [[doyen of drafting]].</ref> or [[Mark-up|marked up]] to ''oblivion'' by the [[rent-seeking]] massive.<ref>The [[JC]] knows this, because he’s tried it. No [[counterparts]] clause! No waiver of jury trials! It was still worth doing, but it didn’t completely solve the problem.</ref> Your voice was but a candle in the storm. We despair of NDAs, but remain curiously invested in their form. Hence, slit trenches. 


But OneNDA, as a community effort, has the potential to change that: interested people came from far and wide to help; everyone<ref>Everyone except [[Ken Adams|the doyen of drafting]] himself, that is: https://www.adamsdrafting.com/onenda-is-mediocrenda-thoughts-on-a-proposed-standard-nondisclosure-agreement/ </ref> checked their agenda at the door. This was what Wikipedians call a “[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barn_raising barn-raising]”. The community came together for the greater good of all.  
But OneNDA, as a community effort, has the potential to change that: interested people came from far and wide to help; everyone<ref>Everyone except [[Ken Adams|the doyen of drafting]] himself, that is: https://www.adamsdrafting.com/onenda-is-mediocrenda-thoughts-on-a-proposed-standard-nondisclosure-agreement/ </ref> checked their agenda at the door. This was what Wikipedians call a “[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barn_raising barn-raising]”. The community came together for the greater good of all.