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 “Yeah.”
-She scoffs, but vibes playful. She runs a finger round the rim of his glass. Their eyes lock again. “Oh, soldier, so you were ''[[preceding business day convention|preceding]]''?”
+She scoffs, but vibes playful. She runs a finger round the rim of his glass. Their eyes lock again. “O.K., soldier, so you say you were ''[[preceding business day convention|preceding]]''?”
-He shrugs. “I guess I figured you would wind up here eventually, so I just made sure I got here first. I guess I was, ahhh — [[Modified following business day convention|''modified'' following]] you.”
+He shrugs. “I guess I figured you would wind up here eventually, so I just made sure I got here first. I was, ahhh — [[Modified following business day convention|''modified'' following]] you.”
-He spits his drink. They get close. The party gets loud.
+She spits her drink. He pops an olive. The zydeco wails. They get close.
-She says, “my boat’s tied up outside.” ''This'' he does not expect.