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 Boone wiped his face and adjusted his goggles. “I got it, G. Just a little further —”
-Deep in the bowels of the ETS there was a deep, subsonic moan, as if a God, , stirred from a sleep of aeons.
+The Eagle Squad leader reached into ancient contraption again, but as he did so, deep in the bowels of the [[ETS]] there was a deep, subsonic moan, as if a God, or a monster, was finally stirring from the slumber of aeons.
-What the ''fuck'' was that?
+''What the fuck was that?''
-There was, nearby, a vigorous flutter, like a scrambling bird.
+Nearby, a vigorous flutter, an explosion of limbs, like a scrambling bird escaping from its predator’s clutch.
-Roly! Roly!
+“Roly! ''Roly''! Come back! Where are you going?”
-But the young [[squadsman]] had gone.
+But the young [[squadsman]] had gone. A righteous sneer curled Algy’s lip.
-“C’mon gang, this is a dead end. No-one will read this, or understand it, much less ever use it. Let’s get out of here.”
+Boone stood up. “C’mon gang, this is a dead end. No-one will read this, or understand it, much less ever use it. We better find [[Roly]]. Let’s get out of here.”
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